Writing Week4

Use your imagination to tell this story.

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  1. i opend the door but there was nothing there i looked up there was a goblin i ran
    but there were zombie barberein's. i was traped.

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    1. Reuben[wonder woman]2 November 2014 at 12:33

      don't need this one

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  2. I opened the door but there was nothing there. I looked up, there was a goblin.I ran.
    But there zombie barbirans. I was trapped

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  3. I opened the door and it was just my little brother. He told me he's scared.

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  4. i said came with me.

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  5. it was my big sister trying to scare me.

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  6. So I looked through the keyhole and it was my little sister. I dressed up as a zombie with an axe then opened the door and scared my sister away.

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  7. I went under my bed and the door creaked open and a bright light came into my bedroom and then it went off I looked up and there at my door was the queen I got out from under my bed and got up and went to the door it was the queen she said to go back to bed.

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  8. But, it was the queen and she said youre dreaming.


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  9. I was so scared that the monster was trying to get my money of me.

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  10. Soon I was so curious I just had to open the door. I opened the door, feeling scared. A bright torch light shone on me. I looked up. It was only my mum. I asked her, " Why are you up at this time of the night? " and she said, " To give you your medicine and a drink of water. "

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  11. I went all quiet and hid under the bed. I was waiting for the person to go away.

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  12. I was scared I did not know what to do the door opened it was my dog it came into my room but I realize it wasn't my dog knocking I was scared.

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  13. I't was a stranger instead of my dog I was to scared to say anything so I stuffed pillows in my bed as fast as I can so the stranger will think i'm in my bed and then I jumped out the window and went next door and they looked after me for now on.

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